When I drafted before I enter this class I would just start writing and that would just be my first draft not putting hardly any thought into my papers and just adding what I think was needed during the editing stages. Now that I have gained some new strategies I jot a few ideas down and write little info around them making the structure of my paper before I even start my drafting process.

  Thinking back on apex I really didn't want to spend my summer this way but now that I have completed the program I am actually glad that I had this opportunity because I will now be ahead in the fall of my freshmen year of college. not only is the head start a plus but I was able to receive seven credit for the price of non. being able to spend this time on campus have showed me also that campus life really isn't for me, I'm more of a private person who would like more alone time so this fall I will be finding a nice size apartment.

      With my education I want go on to be the best that I can be in life. living my dream becoming a successful business owner and funeral director. I will own and direct my own funeral service, helping families go through their time of grief.

Coming into the summer bridge I only knew one person which was Jasmine Burrell. Others called me antisocial because I really didn't say much to them but I'm just not the type to just be friendly or try to make friends. Now if you see me you wouldn't get that Impression because there's still people that I don't talk to but you'll see me walking and talking to a few other students that are in my group. I wouldn't call all of them friends but the ones that I would are Jasmine Adore 'Ray and Raymond. I eat, study, workout, and do group project with them all the time.

I believe that sample three was the best one because its clearly structured. I was able to see the thesis throughout the paper, unlike in the other samples.

I favorite moment in english1010 is when I finally got the understanding of the rhetorical analysis paper to the point where I was able to write it efficiently. I think the most important thing I learned was the different types of writing that we faced throughout the course.  

Out of the workshop the most helpful piece of advise that I got was to go back into my paper and make sure I'm focusing on the what assignment is asking for, and to include it in my thesis.